Ahh, the night sky and the darker tone...I like it better.
I have to agree with Pixel of Doom about the white being too bright; a a little bit darker shade probably do the trick, but all in all, do what you want, it is your work afterall.
P.S. I think it would be neat for someone like the person who drew this piece to draw Deadpool, and you could color it. I don't think I've seen any Deadpool artwork anywhere yet (and maybe I missed it somewhere). Just a thought that suddenly popped into my head.
f'n sweet man, i love the new tones, very cool. Only thing...and i know your not done yet but the white outlines that are ment to seperate spidey from the background...white might be too much of a bright color for it to look right...maybe use an ambient tone like a light brown or a gunmetal grey or something...looks great though!
no problem man, glad you can take critiqueing like a mature proffessional.
well it IS a night shot so i guess some harsh lighting around the spidey. Then again the whole thing isn't finished and it might look better after all the areas are darkened that need to be.